hello world, if hello is even a word
hello father, why do your eyes pierce her girth
*
her innocence aflee, from the very first day
they say reality stinks
they didn’t tell her it does from your very birthday
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you were supposed to be her strength, but you tore her apart
overdosed on bile, the enzyme of your heart
with every step came disgust, as she climbed her charts
now look at her, ice-box fenced around her heart
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the cries of a girl, piled from nails of hate
the warmth of love, riled from burns of loathe
how coldly, have you looked upon thy daughter
thy creation, demur – a meat for your slaughter
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a fight to the life, death was her only cloud
she was never scared to drown, her tears are covered in shroud
*
but somehow, she holds dear her last glimpse of light
her david within is now ready to fight
come forth goliath, you’re nothing but a myth
with a might of forgiveness – she becomes thy crypt
come forth i dare you, your time is nigh
let it be known, her glory would be your last sight
*
with every last bruise you gave her
for all the days she dreanched in tears
for every last brick in your kremlin
she emerged from a den of fears
*
and she says thank you, for she has learned to conquer
thank you, for your hate was her sponsor
thank you, for creating a monster
thank you, for you made her stronger
this piece is inspired by a fellow writer. her true story is the soul of this piece.
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Thank you, this poem is lovely. Sometime I feel that reality is more fable than fiction story.
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it is. all fiction comes from some form of fiction. Thank you, you helped paint that picture.
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🙂 no problem and thank you for reading my posts
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Anytime
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I like the emotion in this piece and especially like the last stanza because rather than harboring bitter hatred, she chooses to focus on the ‘good’ traits life has formed for her. To find out from your comment that it was inspired by a true story made it even better.
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It is. Thank you. Inspired by http://www.lufira.wordpress.com
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A powerfully, moving piece – strength gained through the crucible of pain and betrayal – the line that really stayed with me was – with a might of forgiveness – she becomes thy crypt. Wow – everything a good poem should be. Thanks.
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thank you so much.its inspired by a true story . i’m glad it resonated 🙂
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Wow – I absolutely love this piece. Powerful imagery that moves you. I don’t know where to begin, so to save myself from the difficulty of choosing, it all is just inspiring…
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thanks Samuel, much appreciated.
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Inspiring.,new thoughts help to understand things differently .Have a wonderful new year.
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thank you so much. same to you.
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This post is so apt for what is my country, India, is going through…. The Delhi rape case has shook us… Indeed, daughters have become a meat for slaughter…
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this was inspired from such horror.
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Like this one.
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Thanks
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Reblogged this on Samm James…. Always.
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Hi Andreafellinipoetry. Thank you for calling by and liking my poem ‘Walk The Underground’. The Foureyed Poet.
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